Notes
- own narrative
- few establishing shots of city with music increasing
- shot of man statue with his arms out, plain white background maybe the sky, look like name is coming out of his hand or something, lots of empty space makes our attention focus, fade of light in top left
- shots of main characters from different angles in a black room very shadowy
- flashing different shots of different statues with names in extra space
- quite white/greysih and very quick
- another quick all round shot of a main character in same black room
- shots of city life
- shot of a gold statue on a greyish one, angel, clouded sky but bit blue going like through time - more colour, hope?
- shot reverse shot of city and statues
- shot of worried hands, BCU quick
- oldish like library building..main setting maybe- shadowy
- main title- Two main characters faces which saw earlier, in like reflection then the blur and fade to back ground with a glass like window kinda effect, with lines or cracks in, and damages appears, text it almost as if its been torn.
- few credits after so title in middle, main bit
- BCU of bloody womens hands holding something. Darkish shadowy- foreshadowing?
- two more even quicker flashes of same main characters, could be whats to come
- lights in city flash up and down like when u squint at a light, distorted, crazed, panicy? city lights match increasing boom of music.
Overall
OK this is fine in terms of format (good to have bullet points) but you need to use more terms throughout and try to link what you find in real films with any ideas you have for your sequence.
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